Fire Light

So the person died? *trying to clarify*

Master Yoda, thank you. I understand that he does respect the military, but there is a large portion of people (many that I know) that don't think so as a ...

P.S., Please try to even out your reviews to posts ratio. And welcome to the YWS, with many, many happy returns!

Hey, you didn't put a stamp on it, you can't expect it to get to Today! If you go out and buy a stamp right now, it may get there ...

Hmm... wow... Normally stuff like this would just seem so cliched, but this is actually very good. You totally put me out of business in the bad grammar department. So ...

uh... (this won't count as a review, will it?) what exactally happened here? the author deleted the post? the account?something?

Hmm, very interesting. You wrote "Hi, It's me, the one who took your sanity." That line was probably the best line in the poem. All in all it was very ...

Hmm... it was pretty good, though Snoink has a good point: you could have mentioned more about Anna. At least mention more specifically why she was running. Besides that it ...

Hmmm... very interesting, although it was kind of confusing but kind of thrilling the way you switched point of views. A nice piece of work, all the same. This could ...